Dralen Zhor - Revision history

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	==Academy==		==Academy==
	In [[44GrS]], Dralen successfully applied to the [[New Republic]]'s [[Tarsonis Academy]] in the [[Greeop Sector]], which, being three sectors rimward of his homeworld, was the closest front in the war against the Empire. However during his time there he demonstrated an effective lack of all skills useful for a special operations soldier. His training officer, Major [[Tyreece Zadria]] took pity on the cadet when she washed him out of the Zealot training programme, by promoting him to Private and assigning him to a ship posting in the [[Subterrel Strike Force]] as a junior comm specialist on one of the SSF's warships.		In [[44GrS]], Dralen successfully applied to the New Republic's [[Tarsonis Academy]] in the [[Greeop Sector]], which, being three sectors rimward of his homeworld, was the closest front in the war against the Empire. However during his time there he demonstrated an effective lack of all skills useful for a special operations soldier. His training officer, Major [[Tyreece Zadria]] took pity on the cadet when she washed him out of the Zealot training programme, by promoting him to Private and assigning him to a ship posting in the [[Subterrel Strike Force]] as a junior comm specialist on one of the SSF's warships.

	Not content with this, and convinced he could prove Major Zadria wrong about her assessment of his abilities, Dralen used his life savings (400 credits) to hire a slicer to alter his assignment orders. These orders would not stand up to a thorough investigation, but would pass visual inspections as legitimate. Upon boarding a shuttle to the front lines in the [[Subterrel Sector]], Private Zhor departed [[Tarsonis]] with orders specifying he be assigned as a comm specialist on an SSF warship until the first available position came up in any elite special operations units.		Not content with this, and convinced he could prove Major Zadria wrong about her assessment of his abilities, Dralen used his life savings (400 credits) to hire a slicer to alter his assignment orders. These orders would not stand up to a thorough investigation, but would pass visual inspections as legitimate. Upon boarding a shuttle to the front lines in the [[Subterrel Sector]], Private Zhor departed [[Tarsonis]] with orders specifying he be assigned as a comm specialist on an SSF warship until the first available position came up in any elite special operations units.

David Vaughan at 05:19, 13 June 2008

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	Despite his run-ins with the aggressive humanoid, Dralen was assigned as a gunner of the Wookiee [[Anishor]]'s two-seater Y-wing in the upcoming space battle which was to take place in the [[The Battle of the Maxite Belt (110)\|Maxite belt]].		Despite his run-ins with the aggressive humanoid, Dralen was assigned as a gunner of the Wookiee [[Anishor]]'s two-seater Y-wing in the upcoming space battle which was to take place in the [[The Battle of the Maxite Belt (110)\|Maxite belt]].

	This was one of the worst possible postings for the young Human, who had never had much contact with non-Human species during his childhood or even his adult years to date. Therefore his interactions with Anishor ~~are~~ extremely uncomfortable, as the large Wookiee is a source of terror to the young man.		This was one of the worst possible postings for the young Human, who had never had much contact with non-Human species during his childhood or even his adult years to date. Therefore his interactions with Anishor were extremely uncomfortable, as the large Wookiee was a source of terror to the young man.

			==Battle of the Maxite Belt==
			Private Zhor was the Wookiee [[Anishor]]'s gunner in the Y-wing they flew in the Battle of the Maxite belt. Apart from being a hopelessly bad marksman, Dralen actually fainted within the first few moments of the battle, waking only towards the end.

			In the aftermath of the battle, Dralen checked himself into the medical centre, suspecting a knock to he head had caused him to lose consciousness in the previous mission. It did not even occur to the young private that he had actually fainted from fear.

			==Infiltration of Penumbra Base==
			Despite the suspicions of his Wookiee colleague, Private Zhor was part of the Zealot operation to infiltrate the heavily-defended Rogue Imperial base known as Penumbra to extract information from the Imperial network vital to the war effort in the Subterrel Sector. The base was deep within hostile territory, and Zealot infiltrated the station in the guise of an Imperial musical troupe that were the entertainment at an Imperial wedding held onboard.

			During the wedding reception, Dralen completely blew Zealot Unit's cover by tripping over and unleashing his hidden vibroblade into the boot of one of the Imperial wedding guests. Pandemonium erupted, and Dralen fled in fear, hiding at the back of the stage while the firefight between Zealot operatives and the Imperial defenders started. Private Zhor was only drawn from his catatonic state when Kaz Falcion assaulted him to snap him back into reality.

			Dralen then successfully retrieved his communication gear and made contact with the extraction vessel, which was inbound to Penumbra base.

	==Currently==		==Currently==
	Private Zhor is currently ~~stationed in a Y-wing waiting for his pilot [[Anishor]]~~ to ~~return from a pre-battle meeting on the Frigate ''[[Unforgiven]]'' in the [[Subterrel Sector]]~~. ~~He has no idea what~~ he ~~is doing as~~ a ~~gunner, as his marksman skills are dreadful~~.		Private Zhor is currently following the rest of Zealot Unit as they attempt to reach Hangar Bay Three, where their extraction ship is heading. His emotional and mental state is extremely fragile, and he could relapse into a total breakdown at any given moment.

David Vaughan: ==Initiation to Zealot==

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==Initiation to Zealot==

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	During one of his shifts, he intercepted comm traffic indicating that there had been some survivors from Zealot who had managed to return to the Subterrel Strike Force. Seeing his dream of being part of the unit back within his reach, he endeavoured to track down the commanding officer and join the special operations unit.		During one of his shifts, he intercepted comm traffic indicating that there had been some survivors from Zealot who had managed to return to the Subterrel Strike Force. Seeing his dream of being part of the unit back within his reach, he endeavoured to track down the commanding officer and join the special operations unit.

			==Initiation to Zealot==
			Through a series of unfortunate events, Dralen successfully managed to receive a permanent transfer to [[Zealot]] Unit, leaving his ''Unforgiven'' posting, and quickly ran afoul of the unforgiving Admiral [[Kaz Falcion]], who physically attacked him on two occasions before undertaking his first mission.

			Despite his run-ins with the aggressive humanoid, Dralen was assigned as a gunner of the Wookiee [[Anishor]]'s two-seater Y-wing in the upcoming space battle which was to take place in the [[The Battle of the Maxite Belt (110)\|Maxite belt]].

			This was one of the worst possible postings for the young Human, who had never had much contact with non-Human species during his childhood or even his adult years to date. Therefore his interactions with Anishor are extremely uncomfortable, as the large Wookiee is a source of terror to the young man.

	==Currently==		==Currently==
	Private Zhor is currently ~~assigned~~ to the Frigate ''[[Unforgiven]]'' ~~as a junior communication specialist~~ in the [[Subterrel Sector]]. He is ~~trying to locate~~ a ~~commanding officer of Zealot~~, ~~to transfer from~~ his ~~current station into the special operations unit~~.		Private Zhor is currently stationed in a Y-wing waiting for his pilot [[Anishor]] to return from a pre-battle meeting on the Frigate ''[[Unforgiven]]'' in the [[Subterrel Sector]]. He has no idea what he is doing as a gunner, as his marksman skills are dreadful.

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	{{quote\|To put it quite bluntly, you do not posses any of the skills or characteristics that would be suited for a special operational unit. I'm sorry, Dralen, but I think it would be a danger to yourself and your comrades to assign you to such a dangerous posting. I'm afraid you don't have what it takes to be a soldier.\|Major [[Tyreece Zadria]]}}		{{quote\|To put it quite bluntly, you do not posses any of the skills or characteristics that would be suited for a special operational unit. I'm sorry, Dralen, but I think it would be a danger to yourself and your comrades to assign you to such a dangerous posting. I'm afraid you don't have what it takes to be a soldier.\|Major [[Tyreece Zadria]]}}


	'''Dralen Zhor''' is a Human male from [http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Almar Almar] who has aspirations of joining [[Zealot Special Operations Unit]], despite lacking the necessary skills or qualifications.		'''Dralen Zhor''' is a Human male from [http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Almar Almar] who has aspirations of joining [[Zealot Special Operations Unit]], despite lacking the necessary skills or qualifications.

David Vaughan at 07:37, 8 February 2008

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	{{quote\|To put it quite bluntly, you do not posses any of the skills or characteristics that would be suited for a special operational unit. I'm sorry, Dralen, but I think it would be a danger to yourself and your comrades to assign you to such a dangerous posting. I'm afraid you don't have what it takes to be a soldier.\|Major [[Tyreece Zadria]]}}		{{quote\|To put it quite bluntly, you do not posses any of the skills or characteristics that would be suited for a special operational unit. I'm sorry, Dralen, but I think it would be a danger to yourself and your comrades to assign you to such a dangerous posting. I'm afraid you don't have what it takes to be a soldier.\|Major [[Tyreece Zadria]]}}

	'''Dralen Zhor''' is a Human male from [http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Almar Almar] who has aspirations of joining [[Zealot Special Operations Unit]], despite lacking the necessary skills or qualifications.		'''Dralen Zhor''' is a Human male from [http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Almar Almar] who has aspirations of joining [[Zealot Special Operations Unit]], despite lacking the necessary skills or qualifications.
	{{New Republic character infobox\|		{{New Republic character infobox\|

David Vaughan: ==''Unforgiven'' Crewer==

2008-02-08T07:37:13Z

==''Unforgiven'' Crewer==

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			{{quote\|To put it quite bluntly, you do not posses any of the skills or characteristics that would be suited for a special operational unit. I'm sorry, Dralen, but I think it would be a danger to yourself and your comrades to assign you to such a dangerous posting. I'm afraid you don't have what it takes to be a soldier.\|Major [[Tyreece Zadria]]}}
	'''Dralen Zhor''' is a Human male from [http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Almar Almar] who has aspirations of joining [[Zealot Special Operations Unit]], despite lacking the necessary skills or qualifications.		'''Dralen Zhor''' is a Human male from [http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Almar Almar] who has aspirations of joining [[Zealot Special Operations Unit]], despite lacking the necessary skills or qualifications.
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	Not content with this, and convinced he could prove Major Zadria wrong about her assessment of his abilities, Dralen used his life savings (400 credits) to hire a slicer to alter his assignment orders. These orders would not stand up to a thorough investigation, but would pass visual inspections as legitimate. Upon boarding a shuttle to the front lines in the [[Subterrel Sector]], Private Zhor departed [[Tarsonis]] with orders specifying he be assigned as a comm specialist on an SSF warship until the first available position came up in any elite special operations units.		Not content with this, and convinced he could prove Major Zadria wrong about her assessment of his abilities, Dralen used his life savings (400 credits) to hire a slicer to alter his assignment orders. These orders would not stand up to a thorough investigation, but would pass visual inspections as legitimate. Upon boarding a shuttle to the front lines in the [[Subterrel Sector]], Private Zhor departed [[Tarsonis]] with orders specifying he be assigned as a comm specialist on an SSF warship until the first available position came up in any elite special operations units.

			==''Unforgiven'' Crewer==
			Upon arriving in the Subterel Sector, it quickly became apparent that Dralen's forged orders were next to useless, as the elite special operations unit, [[Zealot]], were missing in action, all members presumed dead. The Private was automatically assigned to his secondary placement orders, the ones legitimately provided by Major Zadria back at the academy, and Private Zhor became a junior communications officer of the Nebulon-B Frigate ''[[Unforgiven]]''.

			During one of his shifts, he intercepted comm traffic indicating that there had been some survivors from Zealot who had managed to return to the Subterrel Strike Force. Seeing his dream of being part of the unit back within his reach, he endeavoured to track down the commanding officer and join the special operations unit.

	==Currently==		==Currently==
	Private Zhor is currently ~~onboard a shuttle en route~~ to the [[~~Subterrel Strike Force~~]]~~, where he will join the brave men and women fighting for the New Republic on the front lines of~~ the [[Subterrel Sector]].		Private Zhor is currently assigned to the Frigate ''[[Unforgiven]]'' as a junior communication specialist in the [[Subterrel Sector]]. He is trying to locate a commanding officer of Zealot, to transfer from his current station into the special operations unit.

David Vaughan: /* Academy */

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Academy

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	==Academy==		==Academy==
	In [[44GrS]], Dralen successfully applied to the [[New Republic]]'s [[Tarsonis Academy]] in the [[Greeop Sector]], which, being three sectors rimward of his homeworld, was the closest front in the war against the Empire. However during his time there he demonstrated an effective lack of all skills useful for a special operations soldier. His training officer, Major [[Tyreece Zadria]] ~~too~~ pity on the cadet when she washed him out of the Zealot training programme, by promoting him to Private and assigning him to a ship posting in the [[Subterrel Strike Force]] as a junior comm specialist on one of the SSF's warships.		In [[44GrS]], Dralen successfully applied to the [[New Republic]]'s [[Tarsonis Academy]] in the [[Greeop Sector]], which, being three sectors rimward of his homeworld, was the closest front in the war against the Empire. However during his time there he demonstrated an effective lack of all skills useful for a special operations soldier. His training officer, Major [[Tyreece Zadria]] took pity on the cadet when she washed him out of the Zealot training programme, by promoting him to Private and assigning him to a ship posting in the [[Subterrel Strike Force]] as a junior comm specialist on one of the SSF's warships.

	Not content with this, and convinced he could prove Major Zadria wrong about her assessment of his abilities, Dralen used his life savings (400 credits) to hire a slicer to alter his assignment orders. These orders would not stand up to a thorough investigation, but would pass visual inspections as legitimate. Upon boarding a shuttle to the front lines in the [[Subterrel Sector]], Private Zhor departed [[Tarsonis]] with orders specifying he be assigned as a comm specialist on an SSF warship until the first available position came up in any elite special operations units.		Not content with this, and convinced he could prove Major Zadria wrong about her assessment of his abilities, Dralen used his life savings (400 credits) to hire a slicer to alter his assignment orders. These orders would not stand up to a thorough investigation, but would pass visual inspections as legitimate. Upon boarding a shuttle to the front lines in the [[Subterrel Sector]], Private Zhor departed [[Tarsonis]] with orders specifying he be assigned as a comm specialist on an SSF warship until the first available position came up in any elite special operations units.

David Vaughan: Rank from Cadet to Private

2008-02-03T03:57:52Z

Rank from Cadet to Private

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	'''Dralen Zhor''' is a Human male from [http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Almar Almar] ~~currently training at the New Republic academy on~~ [[~~Tarsonis~~]].		'''Dralen Zhor''' is a Human male from [http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Almar Almar] who has aspirations of joining [[Zealot Special Operations Unit]], despite lacking the necessary skills or qualifications.
	{{New Republic character infobox\|		{{New Republic character infobox\|
	\|name=Dralen Zhor		\|name=Dralen Zhor
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	\|affiliation=New Republic		\|affiliation=New Republic
	\|associations=		\|associations=
	\|ranks=~~Cadet~~		\|ranks=Private
	\|titles=		\|titles=
	}}		}}

David Vaughan: /* Currently */

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Currently

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	==Currently==		==Currently==
	~~Cadet~~ Zhor is currently ~~stationed on [[Tarsonis]], undergoing training at~~ the [[~~Tarsonis Academy~~]], where he ~~hopes to graduate~~ and ~~gloriously do his part to ensure~~ the ~~defeat~~ of the ~~Empire~~.		Private Zhor is currently onboard a shuttle en route to the [[Subterrel Strike Force]], where he will join the brave men and women fighting for the New Republic on the front lines of the [[Subterrel Sector]].

David Vaughan: /* Academy */

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Academy

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	==Academy==		==Academy==
	In [[44GrS]], Dralen successfully applied to the [[New Republic]]'s [[Tarsonis Academy]] in the [[Greeop Sector]], which, being three sectors rimward of his homeworld, was the closest front in the war against the Empire.		In [[44GrS]], Dralen successfully applied to the [[New Republic]]'s [[Tarsonis Academy]] in the [[Greeop Sector]], which, being three sectors rimward of his homeworld, was the closest front in the war against the Empire. However during his time there he demonstrated an effective lack of all skills useful for a special operations soldier. His training officer, Major [[Tyreece Zadria]] too pity on the cadet when she washed him out of the Zealot training programme, by promoting him to Private and assigning him to a ship posting in the [[Subterrel Strike Force]] as a junior comm specialist on one of the SSF's warships.

			Not content with this, and convinced he could prove Major Zadria wrong about her assessment of his abilities, Dralen used his life savings (400 credits) to hire a slicer to alter his assignment orders. These orders would not stand up to a thorough investigation, but would pass visual inspections as legitimate. Upon boarding a shuttle to the front lines in the [[Subterrel Sector]], Private Zhor departed [[Tarsonis]] with orders specifying he be assigned as a comm specialist on an SSF warship until the first available position came up in any elite special operations units.

	==Currently==		==Currently==