Hopeless Storyline - Revision history

Ray Djo at 02:36, 7 February 2007

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Ray Djo at 03:44, 6 February 2007

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			===A message from Cody===
			[[Image:monkey.jpg\|center]]

	The temporarily-named '''Hopeless Storyline''' is an ongoing tale of the whacky adventures of the crew of the dilapidated training ship ''[[Hopewell]]'', or as it is more unfondly known, the ''Hopeless''.		The temporarily-named '''Hopeless Storyline''' is an ongoing tale of the whacky adventures of the crew of the dilapidated training ship ''[[Hopewell]]'', or as it is more unfondly known, the ''Hopeless''.
	==The Characters==		==The Characters==
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	*''[[J.B. Fizzwinkle]]''		*''[[J.B. Fizzwinkle]]''
	*''[[Pags Matris]]''		*''[[Pags Matris]]''
	~~==Episode Breakdown==~~

	~~===A message from Cody===~~
	~~[[Image:monkey.jpg\|center]]~~

	==The Story Thus far==		==The Story Thus far==

Ray Djo at 03:43, 6 February 2007

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	*''[[Jarn Farron]]''		*''[[Jarn Farron]]''
	*''[[Maryn Nea]]''		*''[[Maryn Nea]]''
			*''[[Iskander Tamarack]]''
			*''[[Joseph Reynolds]]''
			*''[[Christopher Tharen]]''
			*''[[Derrek O'Sullivan]]''
			*''[[J.B. Fizzwinkle]]''
			*''[[Pags Matris]]''
	==Episode Breakdown==		==Episode Breakdown==
	~~Here's the story so far, broken down into bite sized pieces;~~
	*''[[Introductions]]''
	*''[[Lesson 1]]''
	*''[[Wait, what?]]''

	===A message from Cody===		===A message from Cody===

Ray Djo at 03:27, 6 February 2007

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	The temporarily-named '''Hopeless Storyline''' is an ongoing tale of the whacky adventures of the crew of the dilapidated training ship ''[[Hopewell]]'', or as it is more unfondly known, the ''Hopeless''.		The temporarily-named '''Hopeless Storyline''' is an ongoing tale of the whacky adventures of the crew of the dilapidated training ship ''[[Hopewell]]'', or as it is more unfondly known, the ''Hopeless''.
			==The Characters==
			*''[[Jarn Farron]]''
			*''[[Maryn Nea]]''
	==Episode Breakdown==		==Episode Breakdown==
	Here's the story so far, broken down into bite sized pieces;		Here's the story so far, broken down into bite sized pieces;

Ray Djo: /* Kaz */

2007-02-06T03:23:41Z

Kaz

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	===Kaz===		===Kaz===

	Lt. Jenkins, Communications Officer aboard the Hopewell was a lot of things, but a man capable of keeping his calm		Lt. Jenkins, Communications Officer aboard the Hopewell was a lot of things, but a man capable of keeping his calm during the midst of crisis situations was definately not among them.

	~~during~~ the ~~midst~~ of ~~crisis situations~~ was ~~definately not among them~~.		Currently he was running in a circle around the Hopewell's bridge, alternating between screaming "OHMYGOD OHMYGOD WHERESTHECAPTAIN OHMYGOD" audible even over the warbling of the warning claxons and looking frantically around for anyone who had a clue as to what in the hell he was supposed to be doing.

	~~Currently he was running in a circle~~ around the ~~Hopewell's~~ bridge, ~~alternating between screaming "OHMYGOD OHMYGOD~~		By sheer chance, Jenkins managed to trip over the communications console during his fourteenth circuit around the bridge and happened to notice the flashing light of an incoming transmission. He paused panicking long enough to thumb the switch, only to be greeted by the angry voice of Lt. Jarn Farron.

	~~WHERESTHECAPTAIN OHMYGOD~~" ~~audible even over the warbling of the warning claxons and looking frantically around for~~		"JENKINS YOU SNIVELLY LITTLE SON OF A BITCH, WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON, WE'RE UNDER ATTACK! WHY ARENT WE FIRING BACK?!"

	~~anyone who had a clue as to what in~~ the ~~hell he was supposed to be doing~~.		Jenkins frowned disapprovingly at the console, his extreme distaste for profanity momentarily bringing him back tohis senses.

	~~By sheer chance, Jenkins managed to trip over the communications console during his fourteenth circuit around the~~		"Lieutenant! I assure you there's no place for that type of language! I would imagine our lack of return fire is dueto all members of tactical being present in the aft lounge when the attack began. Something about a beerpong tournament was mentioned I believe."

	~~bridge and happened to notice the flashing light of an incoming transmission. He paused panicking long enough to~~

	~~thumb the switch, only to be greeted by the angry voice of Lt. Jarn Farron.~~

	~~"JENKINS YOU SNIVELLY LITTLE SON OF A BITCH, WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON, WE'RE UNDER ATTACK! WHY ARENT WE FIRING~~

	~~BACK?!"~~

	~~Jenkins frowned disapprovingly at the console, his extreme distaste for profanity momentarily bringing him back to~~

	~~his senses.~~

	"Lieutenant! I assure you there's no place for that type of language! I would imagine our lack of return fire is ~~due~~

	to all members of tactical being present in the aft lounge when the attack began. Something about a beerpong

	tournament was mentioned I ~~think~~."

	"WHAT??! THOSE BASTARDS! IT WASNT SUPPOSED TO START UNTIL 1630..GAH, AND WHERE THE HELL IS NEA?"		"WHAT??! THOSE BASTARDS! IT WASNT SUPPOSED TO START UNTIL 1630..GAH, AND WHERE THE HELL IS NEA?"

			"Colonel Nea is..." Jenkins looked around, suddenly remembering that the ship's captain was nowhere to be found. The thought shook him from his temporary perch on sanity, and he left the com console to resume his screaming trip around the bridge.
	"Colonel Nea is..." Jenkins looked around, suddenly remembering that the ship's captain was nowhere to be found.

	The thought shook him from his temporary perch on sanity, and he left the com console to resume his screaming trip

	around the bridge.

	"JENKINS? JENKINS??!"		"JENKINS? JENKINS??!"

Ray Djo at 03:22, 6 February 2007

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	The door shut behind him and Joe marched resolutely towards the hangar bay.		The door shut behind him and Joe marched resolutely towards the hangar bay.

			===Kaz===

			Lt. Jenkins, Communications Officer aboard the Hopewell was a lot of things, but a man capable of keeping his calm

			during the midst of crisis situations was definately not among them.

			Currently he was running in a circle around the Hopewell's bridge, alternating between screaming "OHMYGOD OHMYGOD

			WHERESTHECAPTAIN OHMYGOD" audible even over the warbling of the warning claxons and looking frantically around for

			anyone who had a clue as to what in the hell he was supposed to be doing.

			By sheer chance, Jenkins managed to trip over the communications console during his fourteenth circuit around the

			bridge and happened to notice the flashing light of an incoming transmission. He paused panicking long enough to

			thumb the switch, only to be greeted by the angry voice of Lt. Jarn Farron.

			"JENKINS YOU SNIVELLY LITTLE SON OF A BITCH, WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON, WE'RE UNDER ATTACK! WHY ARENT WE FIRING

			BACK?!"

			Jenkins frowned disapprovingly at the console, his extreme distaste for profanity momentarily bringing him back to

			his senses.

			"Lieutenant! I assure you there's no place for that type of language! I would imagine our lack of return fire is due

			to all members of tactical being present in the aft lounge when the attack began. Something about a beerpong

			tournament was mentioned I think."

			"WHAT??! THOSE BASTARDS! IT WASNT SUPPOSED TO START UNTIL 1630..GAH, AND WHERE THE HELL IS NEA?"


			"Colonel Nea is..." Jenkins looked around, suddenly remembering that the ship's captain was nowhere to be found.

			The thought shook him from his temporary perch on sanity, and he left the com console to resume his screaming trip

			around the bridge.

			"JENKINS? JENKINS??!"


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Ray Djo: /* Episode Breakdown */

2007-02-06T02:04:03Z

Episode Breakdown

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	==Episode Breakdown==		==Episode Breakdown==
	Here's the story so far, broken down into bite sized pieces;		Here's the story so far, broken down into bite sized pieces;
	*''[[~~Arrivals~~]]''		*''[[Introductions]]''
	*''[[Lesson 1]]''		*''[[Lesson 1]]''
	*''[[Wait, what?]]''		*''[[Wait, what?]]''

Ray Djo at 01:53, 6 February 2007

2007-02-06T01:53:10Z

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	The temporarily-named '''Hopeless Storyline''' is an ongoing tale of the whacky adventures of the crew of the dilapidated training ship ''[[Hopewell]]'', or as it is more unfondly known, the ''Hopeless''.		The temporarily-named '''Hopeless Storyline''' is an ongoing tale of the whacky adventures of the crew of the dilapidated training ship ''[[Hopewell]]'', or as it is more unfondly known, the ''Hopeless''.
			==Episode Breakdown==
			Here's the story so far, broken down into bite sized pieces;
			*''[[Arrivals]]''
			*''[[Lesson 1]]''
			*''[[Wait, what?]]''

			===A message from Cody===
	[[Image:monkey.jpg\|center]]		[[Image:monkey.jpg\|center]]

	==The Story Thus far==		==The Story Thus far==

			Below is everything so far, along with the crazies responsible for each post.

	===Kaz===		===Kaz===

Dave: formatting

2007-01-27T05:51:48Z

formatting

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Ray Djo: just threw the story up, if anyone has any ideas for organizing it, please feel free to do so....I'm all ears

2007-01-27T05:31:38Z

just threw the story up, if anyone has any ideas for organizing it, please feel free to do so....I'm all ears

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